Here we will post some advice for the people who want to write
for the Azeroth Journal, hope you find it useful!
TIPS
FOR INTERVIEWS
Preparing the interview:
First,
try to find as much information as you can about the
character you're going to interview: biography, job, friends
and foes, etc. The more you know, the more you'll be able
to ask about. Search the forums and guild sites, and don't
hesitate to contact the interviewee for any doubts.
When
you've gathered all the data, make a list of the questions
you'll throw at the interviewee. Think about the things that
your readers would like to know, and use the information you
have to dig deeper into that character's life. Don't forget
to separate and organize the questions in themes: biography,
guild, job, current projects, etc.
Agree
on a time and place with the interviewee. Bear in mind
that a crowded location isn't a good choice, you don't want
to be disturbed by other people. You'll want to take some
pictures, so I recommend visiting the place first to have
an idea of the positions from where you can get nice shoots.
And last, the location should be related in some way to the
character you're going to interview.
It's
important to remain impartial: don't let your character's
personal ideas to interfere with the interview! You're here
to know more about your interviewee, not to judge him.
Conducting and recording the interview:
I
highly recommend using macros, or copy-paste, to make things
smoother. If you're going to copy-paste, write down all the
questions in a text file, with "/s " before
each one of them, like this:
/s I've heard that you were born in Gnomeregan, is that true?
/s And what can you tell me of the former glory of your birth
city?
You
can also include some emotes, like:
/e opens her purse and pulls out a pencil and a small notebook.
You
can execute the game in windowed mode, and copy-paste
each sentence from your text file. That way, you'll only have
to type a few words every now and then.
To
record the interview, you can use any log-writing
addon, the one I use is WoWScribe:
it records all /say, /tell, /emote, and you can add any other
channel you want to log.
Remember
that you can hit Alt+Z to hide/show the interface,
in order to take clean screenshots.
After the interview:
Time
to write things down. First, start with an introduction:
at least "where, when, who". Describe the interviewee's
looks and attitude, and the location.
Now,
you have to polish all that has been stored in your log. Again,
organize all that has been said in themes, and separate
them clearly with comments. Don't forget to add all
the emotes that your interviewee used! It isn't just
about what he/she said, but also how it was
said. Example:
Question:
What do you think about <insert enemy guild's name, for
example>?
Answer: I pity them... (shakes his head with sadness)
OR
Answer: I pity them... (grins wickedly, leaning his
hand in his sword)
Last,
one or two paragraphs to close it. You can talk about
the general impression you got, but beware of judging and
try to keep it impartial.
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TIPS ON HOW TO WRITE AN ARTICLE
FROM THE ALLIANCE HERALD FORUM
Posted with permission of The Alliance Herald, and the author,
Laitaine.
The INTRO:
I
is for INTERESTING
It needs to be the most interesting part of the entire story.
It can be:
the latest piece of news
the most outstanding information.
N
is for NOW
One essential difference between news intros and other forms
of communication is that chronology is abandoned for the NOW
angle.
Often, stories are `running'stories - ones that began some
time ago with a major news point and are now being followed
up with various angles.
T
is for TIGHT
The language needs to be concise, with no unnecessary words
or information. At the end of every intro you write, look
at it again and see which words or clauses you can lose. The
eye is the camera to the brain - TV cameras spoon-feed us
with simple images. If we are to compete, we must present
our own clear images in words.
Count the prepositions if the intro seems too long. Get rid
of one or two clauses. Aim for 14 to 20 words. It may be even
shorter. In any case, have the courage to pick the best angle
and leave everything else to the following paragraphs. In
brief, make one striking point clearly and concisely.
R
is for RIGHT
There is no amount of explanation that can justify inaccuracy.
We are in the business of maximizing the essence of any story
so that ordinary people are attracted to it. But we must never
twist it until it becomes misleading. The great professional
writes clever intros without changing the facts.
O
is for OUTSTANDING
This is the part of the story which hooks in the reader. It
must have power so that the interest the reader has shown
in the headline continues through the intro and leads him
on to the rest of the story. The intro is the reporter's opportunity
to demonstrate salesmanship, to show he has a news sense which
is in touch with the readers. Ideally the entire headline
content is contained in the intro - or at least the main thrust
of it.
How
to decide what the news point will be in the intro:
List the key words (usually between eight and ten) that strike
you as being the most important in the story. When you have
done so, go through them and knock out any which are not so
outstanding. Those left will probably give you the basis of
an intro.
Ask
yourself, what would you say if a friend asked you in the
evening to describe the high spot of your day?
Do not:
start with numbers if you can avoid it.
begin with `The' - try and think of something else
start with the names of councils or committees.
begin with names unless they are worth it.
start with quotes.
have an intro full of unnecessary punctuation. Let
it flow.
invert sentences (e.g. Fined £200 for shoplifting,
John Smith ...)
overdo it (Tempers flared ...blazing row .., stormy
debate ... amazing
discovery ... shock ... horror ... slam .., rap) Get rid of
them!
use puns unless they are particularly appropriate and
original - and you are
sure no one could be misled. If in doubt, play it straight
Do:
make every word count.
use short, simple sentences.
start the intro with a phrase that has got impact.
Story structure
There
are no hard and fast rules about story structure. The route
you take after working out the intro can differ with every
piece of copy.
But there is a formula, which can be used to help you develop
the instinct of how to put the facts of a story in a readable
order.
Always remember the Johnston Press training philosophy about
stories - get the facts, tell it straight, keep it simple.
The
WHAT Formula
The key to success is to follow the WHAT triangle guidelines.
List things in order of importance following the WHAT formula:
What
happened.
How
it happened - answer the key questions in the first two, three
or four paragraphs and use a key quote (if there is one) high
in the copy.
Amplify
- go on to amplify the facts of the story in a chronological
order.
Tie-up - use the least relevant information to tie the
story up at the end.
Importance
News
story structure is always one of descending order of importance.
The intro contains the most outstanding facts in the story
- the story in a nutshell.
In
deciding the intro line and content you can ask yourself:
What would be the first thing I would say to give the impact
of the tale to the news desk? Don't forget the key words technique.
The
next couple of pars often cause problems. But it follows that
what you do after the intro is to deal with the next most
important point - the next thing you would give to the news
editor, and so on.
By
the end of the third or fourth par all the salient points
should have been included. You will have answered the key
questions - Who? What? Why? Where? When? How? Sometimes the
process will take two or three pars - it depends on the complexity
of the story.
Remember
the need for good pace - plenty of full stops to separate
facts, especially in stories with lots of facts and figures.
I
have noticed that you tend to tell a story chronologically,
and sometimes we dont get to the crux of it until halfway
through your (exceedingly long) copy.
Quotes
Nothing
tells a story better, in a more dynamic and interesting way,
than a succession of powerful, relevant quotes from the person
who is at the centre of the story. They bring copy to life
and give rhythm and pace in the same way that pertinent use
of full stops can.
If
you have one outstanding quote, use it as close to the intro
as you can. In any case, use it as soon as you have written
the intro and `set the scene'. Keep broken quotes to a minimum.
They spoil the flow of text and betray a poor shorthand note.
Normally try to quote in complete sentences.
Don't
use more than three paragraphs of quote without gently interrupting
the flow. Use a sentence of indirect speech, throw in a statistic,
repeat the name of the person speaking with a descriptive
clause or, at least, use a conjunction like he added
or Mr Smith added.
Balance
Every
story needs to be legal, ethical and balanced. There is an
automatic need for any reporter who quotes an opinion from
one side of the argument to carry the other side as well.
Always represent both sides early in the story, even if a
lot of the detailed replies have to wait until the end.
Tie
up
The
least important facts come in the last couple of pars. They
will tie up any loose strands or detail less important information.
Copy and punctuation
Sentences
Keep
them short and simple.
Long,
flowing sentences meandering around the subject may be acceptable
in certain novels, but are not appreciated by newspaper editors.
Journalism is based on information - so keep copy simple and
straight to the point.
Try
to make sure that sentences are not all the same length. That
makes copy boring.
Don't
invert sentences.
Punctuation
In
newspapers punctuation serves to help the reader understand
the words easily and quickly. A common error is to join separate
sentences with a comma instead of separating them with a full
point.
Take
care not to use poor punctuation that distorts the meaning.
There is a big difference between:
She went back to the house where she had been living with
a man
And
She went back to the house, where she had been living, with
a man.
Be
careful as well not to use too many commas. These can sometimes
stop the flow of the story.
Accuracy
Journalists
live by these two phrases (edited for swearing):
Accuracy is god
And
Check, double check, and check again.
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